Lemonaid - ID# 219
Maine South
News Package
Entry Description
Maine South students cover the annual fundraising event, LemonAid, on September 11th in River Forest, IL. The event helps raise funds for those in need.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 7:51 am - Interesting package. Good b-roll and camera composition. Good use of lower thirds and location of interviews. I don’t understand why there are two reporters. To me it looks like they were afraid to appear on camera alone.
- 3/7 9:50 am - Keep some of your shots short & sweet-get what you need to really focus what you want.
- 3/6 10:19 pm - GREAT intro, including graphics; way to build in a call to action for the story!
- 3/5 9:27 am - Good visuals, nice soundbites, writing needs improvement and don't hold a stick mic with two hands. Overall, a good story/pkg. The visuals matched the words, that's always good. Music was good too. Some of the pans were too much.
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