Bath Bombs - ID# 22

Glenbrook North
Demonstration
Entry Description

Learn how to make and customize your very own bath bomb from the comfort of your house, saving you money and helping you relax.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 9:11 pm - Story: The style and story of this demo worked well together. The steps made sense and were easy to follow. It was concise and flowed in a way that made sense. Sound: Diegetic sound and music were mixed well. Camera/Lighting/editing: Because the tablecloth you used had a lot of flowers on it, it made it a little distracting and hard to see what was going on somethingmes, so consider something that's just a solid color. This was interesting!
  • 4/25 6:39 am - Story Clear and understandable process Sound Music fit selection fit the process. Not sure the natural sounds were needed until the end of the video Camera shot variety and composition helped articulate the story Lighting was good
  • 4/16 3:40 pm - Good use of Close-Up camera shots as you go through the demonstration. Music selection combined with the natural sounds works well with the images you recorded. Good use of different types of transitions throughout the video. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1

Positives: Nice camera shots. Story told clearly. Enjoyed story idea.

Improvements: Something moved too quickly for demo. Hard sometimes to read graphics with writing.

Judge 2

Positives: Good job with the changing of your angles when you make and edit. I like that the process is clear and makes it easy to follow if I were to do this at home.

Improvements: There are times when natural sound comes in and out. Work to make it as consistent as possible so as to avoid it being a distraction. There is a jump cut at 1:14. Make sure to look at this and work to avoid it, it does seem avoidable. When there are jump cuts they can be distracting. There are times that I wish the lighting was a little better, but overall not a major issue.

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