Deja vu - ID# 241
Homewood-Flossmoor
Social Media
Entry Description
Creativity ensues when a students hears the sweet sounds of Beyonce.
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- 4/28 1:53 am - I love this fantasy idea and the transition to your fantasy. Nice use of lighting and audio. I would just suggest improving the audio at the end...the dialogue between the two characters. Some high quality stuff but then ends with low quality audio. Very creative, nicely done.
- 4/26 9:18 am - Interesting fantasy take on being immersed and taken away so-to-speak by an artist and their art. It's also pretty cool how the idea of Deja Vu plays on difference levels: the literal, I've been here before and of course, the song title. Deja Vu, I've been here before and now because of the music, I'm going to go there again. I might be reading too much into this, but if that's what you were going for, nicely done! There's some lowkey fashion here too with the sweet Coogi sweater which I think matches the vibe and what Beyonce' brings to the table both in art and life. Cool idea and all done in :30-seconds.
Judge 1
Positives: Great nat sound at the beginning. Great lighting for the dancing part.
Improvements: The sound mixing needs work. The transition from nat audio to the song was really abrupt and jarring. This video doesn't follow the prompt: Using the editing tools available on your phone/social media app, create a video using ONLY your cell phone that includes ALL of the following items: school mascot, front of your school, school colors, school clothing, and sign with your school name. These items could be combined (ex: school colors are on your school shirt.
Judge 2
Positives: I liked how you used different lights to convey the storyline. Good intro, middle and end.
Improvements: The pace wasn't terrible, but for social media I would have cut it down a bit more since people have sort attention spans.
Judge 3
Positives: Good story line. Creative lighting. Nicely done!
Improvements: ending may need a retake.
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