Candidate Fair - ID# 250
Metea Valley
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/6 9:47 am - Some nice b-roll. Well shot and good variety to show us what happened. But then it just stopped. After the teacher starts to talk, cut away to b-roll so we do not have to just keep watching a talking head. Also, you could have covered up the jumpcut with the b-roll. If you or your team did not shoot the b-roll, you really should give attribution to where you got it from. Audio is nice and clear. Since this is a hard news story, you do not want music under it. Music is for human interest or soft news stories. At the very end we should either see the reporter or some more relevant b-roll, not just a fade to black and then a black screen.
- 3/6 9:41 pm - Great content, but maybe lower the volume or cut the music as a whole to eliminate distraction; have something on the screen at the end to really add closure to the story, and then you can use your fade to black
- 2/27 12:32 pm - The reporter wrote to the broll. Music was distracting - needed more nat sound SOTS were too long (jumpcut) Black at the end It was an informative piece
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