Professor Pizza - ID# 251
Metea Valley
News Package
Entry Description
Famous contest pizza maker Professor Pizza visits our school.
Copyright Info
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 7:48 am - Interesting story. Good b-roll. I’m hungry now! Avoid jumpcuts. You could have easily covered them by having your b-roll go a little bit longer. The ending is more like a commercial instead of a news package.
- 3/7 9:54 am - Great story, but it seemed almost more of a "highlight reel" or commercial. Maybe focus on a specific component of this story.
- 2/28 1:38 pm - The subject was good - the guy was a character There were lots of good shots/video Music was good Too many jump cuts It was too long - it got a bit boring
Judge 1
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 2
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 3
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 4
Positives:
Improvements:
Judge 5
Positives:
Improvements: