4/6 9:47 am - Nice story. Some good b-roll.
For the most part, the reporter’s audio is lower than the interviewee.
Nice close up b-roll at the very beginning, but since you are talking about the dogs in the library, you should show the dogs in there instead of buttons.
We don’t like to see mic cables. With her hair, you could have run the cable back and down her back since her hair would hide the cable, instead of it hanging down in front. Also, it would be more interesting if you did the interview so we can see you are in the library, even if it just showed the stacks.
3/6 9:37 pm - Love the subject- great student voiceover work, some jumps in student voiceover and when you are on camera with the dog
2/27 12:28 pm - Cute subject - creative moment talking to the dog - that was clever.
Needed more nats, there were some jump cuts,
Dress the mic better and needed music.
Lots of good shots, needed more wide angles
Good writing