Whoopie Pie - ID# 283

Metea Valley
Demonstration
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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 3:23 pm - Story: The message is clear in that we see what's being made and, for the most part, how to make it. However, adding things like the measurements would greatly add to the the step by step process. Because if someone wants to make this they would then need to look it up somewhere else instead of just getting it form your video. Sound: The music chosen was a good fit, I think having a little diegetic sound would have elevated it a smidge, especially at the end with the snap, and even with the scooping of things, etc. Camera and lighting: worked well for the type of video that you had. When the pan and finished product stop motions up, it can be a little more in frame. Editing: It was pieced together succinctly, I would just suggest adding in measurements, diegetic sound, and also a title.
  • 4/27 6:32 am - Story: Message is somewhat clear although more information on some of the ingredients would have made more understandable Sound: Music matches the video Camera: Good framing. Needed more camera shots, angles, and movements Lighting: Good
  • 4/22 7:09 am - Good Close-Up camera shots and fast editing at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Good use of high angle and Close-Up camera shots throughout the demonstration. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1

Positives: Good idea. Fast motion helped get through all instructions in reasonable time. Camera and lighting well done.

Improvements: Graphics were on the screen and off screen too quickly, could not read or following instructions. Needed a narrator.

Judge 2

Positives: I really like the last shot of the video, as it shows the whole thing completed and makes it look like a good treat. I think that you do a good job of the quick edits without moving the camera and there is a good variety of shots in the process.

Improvements: The opening is very fast and it makes it hard to see what I need for the process. I also do not know what amounts you use. State those for the viewer.

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