No Memory - ID# 291
Shepard High School
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Entry Description
After an incident at a party, Mike has no recollection of what went down. In the events after, everyone seems to know what happened except for him.
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- 4/23 6:06 pm - POSITIVES: First 10 seconds is an engaging opening with the blurred colors & strong audio that is intriguing. Good jump cut sequence at 1:00. Titles are fairly strong, although the movie title should be bolder or larger than the type leading up to it. AREAS for IMPROVEMENT: First half pacing is so slow that I'm not engaged with the characters or the conflict. STORY: You need some shots before the 2nd clip showing people reacting to the main character in a strange way and staring at him, rather than jumping to him saying, "Why is everyone staring at me?" Is the movie called NO MEMORY or THE SECRET? End credits at 1:25 are confusing.
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