4/25 2:51 pm - You have a Great variety of footage, which really showed what happens in your class and around the school and town.
However, this felt like it went on too long, a bit repetitive, and kind of hard to follow in the donut scene
Keep up the good work!
3/14 9:25 am - Pros - Great editing and camera shots in your video! You’re interviews were engaging and informational, well done. I enjoyed your style of making it a week-long process to get some real insight into what a week looks like for you. I really enjoyed seeing those cool cinematic shots of the behind-the-scenes work you included between you speaking to the camera. This collectively could have looked more like a promotional-style video.
Cons - This felt more like a news package. You did a good job promoting the mane, but this style fits more with a news package. The outtakes are funny, and I see why you included them! For this category though, I would omit them as they make the video a tad bit longer.