MMEA Fest

Trying to board an airline isn't as easy as it seems

3/24 10:06 am - Works well - Interesting premise and a good setup. Good costumes and props. The lawnmower jokes was really funny, but almost missed it. Needs work - Some of the framing of the shots felt awkward. The pacing was a bit slow. The inner monologue was an interesting idea, but it wasn't consistent with the rest of the film - maybe you could have done it throughout the whole thing? Lastly, what's the subtext here? It sounds like you're making bad guys out of airport security. This doesn't feel based on any real situation worth criticizing.
3/2 2:04 pm - Good sound effects at 2:12, but then the audio gets too hot. The story was cute, but it felt like it dragged a bit.
2/21 2:52 pm - Camera: Some of the image quality was noisy/grainy. Some shots were slightly out of focus. Lighting: could have used more lighting. This would provide you with better picture quality as well. Sound: nice use of the ambient airport noise to make the scene more believable. Editing: the editing pace dragged. There was a ton of time spent putting on gloves and you could have condensed the story and picked up the pace, which would have made the film more effective. Story: funny concept, but the execution was a bit slow. Comedy is all about timing, so the delivery of the lines, the reaction shots, and the pace of your editing has an impact on how funny the film is.

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