In My Mind - Music Video - ID# 332
South Elgin
Music Video
Entry Description
Animated mindful meanderings contribute to an imaginative aesthetic and pastiche take on the Lyn Lapid song, "In My Mind". Alternate link if YouTube doesn't work: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hoW6S4iJSf-JW3qH8GfnUGIlZgec7TZv/view?usp=sharing
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/21 2:38 pm - The opening sequence is impressive, with an overhead shot of the student at her desk, complemented by intriguing drawings and text overlaid and interacting with subjects in the video. My suggestion would be to consider removing the filter that causes blurriness and distorted appearance of the subject, although this critique is subjective. Overall, the execution is excellent, showcasing creativity and attention to detail.
Judge 1
Positives: The animations work well.
Improvements: There are sync issues. The perfumer could be a bit more energetic. "Disaffected" takes a lot of energy.
Judge 2
Positives: Beautifully acted music video. The editing was really well done. And the main strength of the whole piece was the added animation. So wonderfully done, and the technique and look were appropriate to the point of the song and the story.
Improvements: The camera and lighting could have been improved a little. There were some out of focus shots.
Judge 3
Positives: the illustrations were very effective! There was enough variation there to keep you interested throughout. Main character was cool and engaging. Great song. Great video.
Improvements: I would have liked more of the animations like the train instead of so many words. the train shot stood out as being rather spectacular.
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