Life on Mars - ID# 349
Highland Park
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
Dreaming of a life on mars? Coming to a theater near you.
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- 4/23 4:19 pm - The trailer includes many clips not created by the student, which is not allowed in this category. AREAS for IMPROVEMENT: It's not clear what this story arc would include. Is there more than just the "dream"? If so, there's nothing in the trailer that previews any of those story elements: conflict, other characters or locations.
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