Suburban Poetic Justice - ID# 351

Thornton

Music Video

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Entry Description

(This entry was produced & submitted by THORNTON TOWNSHIP HIGH SCHOOL in HARVEY, ILL.)

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• 2/21 10:15 am - The opening shot of the dark angled car, coupled with the creepy sound, is a powerful way to grab viewers' attention and generate interest. However, the transition to the singer in front of the lockers is abrupt and lacks smoothness. The moment at the 45-second mark, where the singer engages with the audience and the camera movement and natural lighting add visual interest, is great. The camera movement panning between the two singers on the stairs is also well-executed. To enhance visual interest, it would be good to use more dramatic lighting and camera movement, especially for the groups of dancers. The video seems to be struggling to find its footing and is uncertain whether it wants to be a music video, a school spirit video, or a news report. To improve, the video needs a more cohesive storyline or simply to focus solely on being a music video.

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