Film and TV News Episode 1 - ID# 353
Highland Park
News Package
Entry Description
HPTV's Cameron highlights up and coming films and television shows such as "The Last of Us" and "Avatar.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 7:53 am - Nice composition and lighting. When showing b-roll, have a little bit of the audio of it under the reporter. There wasn’t much substance to this. You tried to tackle a number of topics in under 2 minutes, so there was no depth to the coverage, you just skimmed the surface. The ending was weak. Well, that’s all! Have some sort of conclusion or wrapup. When can we see more (episode 2)?
- 3/7 10:02 am - This did not feel like a news pkg - wrong category? This seemed to be more like a film review show, not really a news piece. Good use of graphics
- 3/7 10:01 am - This seems to be more of just film reviews, maybe focus on one film in particular to form more of a story.
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