Demonstration of how to do an "Ollie" on a skateboard. Music from GMP music--our school has a license.
Positives: Interesting story and demo. Great camera shots that showed much detail. Good narration and graphics.
Improvements: There was a loud sound like mic falling off when you first introduced move.DIsruptive to watching.
Positives: I like the use of the X's to make where to place your feet. I like the variety of shots, and think there were places where you could have added more shots to this video. I like the step of moving to the grass, but let the viewer know why this is important.
Improvements: You tell the person that the helmet and pads are recommended but you do not wear them. If you want them to be used then you as the teacher should use them. The loud pop sound at 29 seconds is distracting look to even that out. I am not sure what the shot at 44 seconds is supposed to be. I think it is the wear from sliding your foot, but really make it clear to the viewer. A couple of shots were fast, like the last trick. Slow down the edits.
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