4/27 9:03 pm - The graphics could be less text, short statements with larger fonts look better on video. Pay attention to framing, talent moves out of frame, perhaps a wider shot so the talent can move about the shot. Good closing feels natural and ad-libbed.
4/27 8:24 am - Need more light on talent, from side to avoid smart board glare.
Weather graphics should be short phrases & fragments - not complete or long sentences.
Numbering graphics is awkward.
Great audio.
I wish more schools included weather in their newscasts.
Good ad libbing.
4/13 9:14 pm - Thank you for your entry and sharing your creation with us. I very much enjoyed viewing your submission. Just a few observations. Like your enthusiasm! Framing / camera movement seemed a bit disconnected at times. Could you static shot a framed smart-board and then move around within the frame as you highlight specific items. Good audio. I recognize we only have a few minute clip, but a graphic / lower third could help add detail if technically available. Again, enjoyed viewing your submission and thank you again for entering!