October 20, 2022 – HPTV Announcements - ID# 384
Highland Park
News Program
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Highland Park Television presents your Weekly Announcements with Jaden and Evelyn featuring Sports with Neil, Gaming with Rodrigo, a Philosophy Club Promo, the HP Marching Band at Northwestern, and a quick word from Angel and Yaci in the Domican Republic. MMEA Spanish Translation Transcript: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-C_SsAQjty5M6d4Fi2uXlrsq9HWHbPKBg7VBnmr8f7U/edit?usp=sharing
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 12:17 am - Work on anchor delivery. Consider professional dress and more effective lighting of news desk/anchors. Work on your reads before going on air. Marching band pkg is interesting. Definitely newsworthy to your audience.Tighten up your composition of interviews.
- 4/27 11:40 pm - Open could be stronger. The anchors are oddly close together. The male anchor seems to just be wearing a t-shirt that is a little informal. He does stutter a bit during his read. If you have an anchor reading an intro in spanish, maybe have subtitles. I understand student population might understand her (a portion), but she tosses it to a story and I am not sure what she has said. The rest of the show seems to veer away from a news program. Audio levels are difficult at times to hear as I go. I find myself having to adjust my computer audio with every segment.
- 3/5 10:02 am - Anchors could use a bit more practice- a number of stutters from the boy that lose credibility. Just sounds like he's reading, and not talking to his audience. Interesting idea to mix English and Spanish in the broadcast. Perhaps use subtitles for both, since there are people who can only follow half of the show from the anchors. Segments are newsworthy and are of interest to your audience. Sports covered a lot of sports quickly and accurately. Pretending to get the live feed from the reporters was a bit awkward, and then there was no mention of it after the short segment. Lost a bit of professionalism there. Overall, the show was informative. Think about those subtitles, as you don't want to alienate parts of your audience.
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