How to NOT be Tardy - ID# 386
Shepard High School
Demonstration
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Have you been ever late to class? Maybe get a tardy on your record? Well, we can solve that problem. This video will show you 5 tips on how to avoid getting a tardy.
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- 4/27 9:01 pm - Story: How it started was funny to me. I think it could have been a little shorter, cut it right at the teacher shaking her head. Some of the steps were a little unclear - don't go to the bathroom...but what if they need to? should they wait until they are in class and then ask? Make it plain for your audience. Sound: The music was a nice fit for when the steps began. Camera/Editing: the text was a little hard to read, so consider a stroke around it or shadow. The bell ringing was a good editing choice, and you had a nice variety of shots.
- 4/25 9:20 am - Story: Message is creatively articulated . Watch spelling on graphics Sound: Good voice over and audio mix with music. Camera: Good composition and camera shots Lighting: Good
- 4/18 6:31 am - Good use of Close-Up and point of view shots at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Music selections work well with the images you recorded. Good use of voice-overs and sound effects. Fun and creative idea. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
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