Showchoir - ID# 381

Glenbrook North
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A mockumentary tv show about a showchoir filled with comedy, relationships, drama, and lots of singing.

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  • 4/23 6:19 pm - POSITIVES: Concept is good, but there might be too many main characters to feature in your trailer. Humor is used well. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Narrow down the list of featured characters, and include more close-ups to introduce them. Too many long shots without cutting to MED or CU of your actors. Text to frame the narrative is a bit overused. LONG lines of text might be presented better split into 2 lines with larger text. Closing title color of black on the red curtain is not very readable.
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