My Boyfriend's a Soundcloud Rapper - ID# 383
Antioch Community High School
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A boyfriend who is lost in his own world and everyone is talking about it.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/27 2:37 pm - Works well - Creative storytelling style. Nice job creating the original music. The music works great for the parody style. Needs work - Camerawork is rough, though probably on purpose. The ending was too drawn out after the joke was over.
- 2/24 2:11 pm - Camera was a little too shaky. I know that was for effect, but a little too much so. Funny at its premise. Ending scene felt long. Good audio quality.
- 2/21 12:54 pm - Camera: The handheld “behind the scenes” footage could have been cleaner and less shaky, even though it is intended to look like handheld behind the scenes footage. It kind of drags on for too long. Lighting: Proficient Sound: Sound during the studio testimonials is very airy (a lot of background noise). The cut to the in-studio rap sounded great with the auto-tune. Editing: the behind the scenes footage drags on too long and becomes redundant. Story: The story wasn’t quite clear. I get that you’re making fun of Soundcloud rappers and the general drama of the rap scene, but it seems more like an inside joke than something that everyone would relate to.
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