24 Hour Run - Charity Drive - ID# 397
Highland Park
School Promotion
Entry Description
In support of the Rolfe Pancreatic Cancer Foundation, HPHS students promote the 24 Hour Run to raise money during this Charity Drive event.
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- 4/26 11:24 am - This is a great idea and I really liked the energy of your crew and anchors. However, if you were to do this again, I would do the following: 1.) Have more cameras in place while running through the school. Following someone isn't the same as showing a bunch of kids running through the halls from a wide shot, as well as other candid camera shots throughout the school. WIth that, get bystanders reactions, it helps tell the story. 2.) With talking heads, get closer when they are talking, it gives the audience something to focus on. 3.) Add titles while they are talking to pair the audio with a visual, and maybe add in some b-roll of past runs to showcase what the event looks like 4.) For your closing title, bring the music back up and spend some time making the title look like a poster; add background graphics, various fonts, sizes, and colors to the text, and really put some work into those last 10 seconds. You're on the right track, keep up the good work!
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