4/26 8:58 am - You all have some great footage here, along with a really nice backing track that shows the delicacy and art of color guard. Your audio work was really nice with the interview and you have some really cool shots throughout, particularly with the flag in the air. Going forward, I would suggest getting some close-up shots of some of the color guard work, as well as some of the atmosphere of the gym and the equipment, and finally, the students working with the various flags. For instance, you could have a close-up of a hand on the pole, the flag, waving in slow motion, as well as some silhouette shots. Finally, a couple of notes about your titles at the end, they go way too fast and a good rule of thumb is that you should be able to read a title three times before it leaves the screen. Keep up the great Work