Vita Smoke Detectors - ID# 4

Lyons Township

Commercial

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Entry Description

A dramatic commercial showing the importance of reliable smoke detectors.

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• 3/5 9:01 am - This would have more of an impact if it was shorter and showed flames in the beginning. Also cut to a close-up of the face to connect the emotion.

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