Short of sleep - ID# 404

Batavia

Comedic Narrative

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Entry Description

A comedic look at sleep deprivation among teens and how you can help.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/27 2:56 pm - Works well - Good pacing. Good V-O performance. Entertaining to watch. Needs work - The intended message/purpose here was confusing. It seemed like there was good setup to talk about being sleepy and then have the story wander into nonsense to make a point about getting enough sleep to think straight. Instead, there's a random message about short people that's actually kind of mean.
• 2/24 1:49 pm - Cute. I liked the voiceover delivery and vocal quality. It's not really a story, however.
• 2/21 12:43 pm - This was an entertaining comedic PSA. But, it wasn't really a comedic short film. It doesn't quite fit into the category.

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