Gun Violence Prevention - ID# 407
Batavia
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
PSA on gun violence prevention
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/22 2:06 pm - Text could be more impactful with the message at the end of the video (0:28) if it was all centered rather than spanning from left to right. I liked that you had the initial message along before adding the call to action. Good variety of shots as well with an important message - really liked the use of multiple news source clips appearing.
Judge 1
Positives: The use of music and sound effects was very strong in this piece and was timed very well with the visuals in this piece. The footage was clear, especially the shots in the dark classroom. The captured footage helped support the message.
Improvements: The supporting text and resources could have been on-screen for longer or more concise. The piece could have benefited from more of a variety of camera shots throughout.
Judge 2
Positives: Sound and acting left feeling of terror and worry. End graphics clear and to the point.
Improvements: Story seemed half told. Left too much for viewer to figure out.
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