Monster - ID# 402

Batavia
Music Video

Entry Description

A music video for Dodie's "Monster".

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 2/21 2:34 pm - Great job creatively visualizing the song and taking advantage of the Halloween season and props. The coffin serves as an interesting metaphor for introversion and withdrawal from society. The scene featuring two pumpkins bowing their heads in despair is particularly powerful, and the lighting in this scene is impressive. However, there is room for improvement in terms of lighting and camera work in som other scenes. While the use of daytime shots creates contrast, they may not be as impactful as the nighttime scenes. Adding more movement and depth of field to the shots could also enhance the video's visual appeal. At the 1 minute 15 second mark, the tunnel featured in the video could have been even more impressive with the addition of a strobe light or other post-production effects. Additionally, some footage appears grainy and could benefit from better lighting. Despite these minor flaws, the subject's lip syncing and direct address to the camera are effective throughout the video. The performer does an excellent job and the creative approach to the music video is sure to keep the audience interested and entertained. It looks like in the end she found her pumpkin friends and opened up to the outside world.
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