BHS Drama Program - ID# 417
Batavia
School Promotion
Entry Description
Welcome to the Drama Program of BHS and take a look into the world of theatre!
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 2:50 pm - You have some great shots, along with a variety of shots, definitely some nice b-roll and a-roll. Great audio elements as well. In terms of improvements, it could have used actual live sound when showing the classroom and stage productions in order to really set the scene and bring the audience into that "space". Keep up the good work, you're filming is fantastic, you have a good eye.
- 3/14 9:18 am - Pros - Great camera shots and video overall. You were able to capture the theater department well with your shots and matched the clips with your speaking well. The pans were pretty smooth and the transitions made sense. Cons - I would vary your shots a bit more. They were all very similar in being a wide or medium shots. Also, try and throw some light on your person speaking, there were some dark shadows on his face at times.
Judge 1
Positives: narrative welcoming wide variety of drama program illustrated
Improvements: end could have had more of a punch story could have included more specific examples of theater life
Judge 2
Positives: I like the welcome and the intro shot. It is a nice way to start the video. The scripting of it, and the supporting b-roll make it a strong video with a clear message for the viewer. Good promotional video.
Improvements: Watch the audio. It has an echo to it, and that can be a distraction from the message. There are a couple of out-of-focus shots in the video.
Judge 3
Positives: I liked the use of voiceover to tell the story and share the perspective with the audience. Additionally, the concluding shot of walking through the stage doors was incredibly imaginative and added a unique touch to the production.
Improvements: There is room for improvement in the sound design of this piece. Perhaps adjusting the audio levels around the 0.27 mark would allow the speaker's message to be heard more clearly. Furthermore, the visuals could have been enhanced by incorporating a broader range of imagery to engage and captivate the viewer. You should explore more productions and BTS footage from past productions at this stage.
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