Fighter's Paradise - ID# 427
Maine East
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Two fighters. Two Best Friends. Must Enter the Ring. Face Each Other. And Put It All On the Line.
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- 4/23 3:50 pm - POSITIVES: Shots done on the set with the black backdrop work well, especially the slow-mo! These also work better because of the tighter framing, which allows for more connection to your characters. Good variety of locations that connect to the story. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Pacing of the Story sequence needs to be faster to create the drama you're looking for. Missing a strong connection to the main characters because so many of the shots are long shots. After the big announcement of the fight, the pacing is still too slow; more camera angles and shorter clips, along with more dramatic music would help this. Lighting at :34 is too low, partially caused by the backlighting in the hall; other indoor shots are good
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