Nobody by the Crane Wives - ID# 436
Maine East
Music Video
Entry Description
A story of love, abuse and loss set to the music of the Crane Wives.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 2/21 9:09 am - The opening shot featuring the bench was a bit shaky, and in my opinion, it did not add to the story. Instead, I found myself more focused on the shakiness of the shot rather than the location itself. However, the use of the lyric "holding tighter" in conjunction with the close-up shot of the wrist being grabbed was effective. One issue I noticed was that for the first minute of the video, there was no lip-synching, which made the sudden appearance of lip-synching feel awkward and unestablished up to that point. To improve the video, consider adjusting the white balance and incorporating dramatic lighting to enhance the visuals. Also, adding depth of field to certain shots could enhance the overall visual impact of the video.
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