First Day of My Life - ID# 432

Deerfield
Music Video

Entry Description

Set to the song "The First Day of My Life” by Bright Eyes, this emotional music video that pulls the viewer from the nostalgia of watching home videos into deep reflection and action.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 2/21 8:34 am - The concept of incorporating flashback footage with current footage is intriguing, especially when paired with a sentimental song choice. However, due to the top-down lighting at Starbucks, the video quality for creating a music video may not be optimal, with many subjects being backlit. Nevertheless, the pacing and variety of locations, as well as the use of natural audio, were well executed. The way the video concludes by connecting with the protagonist's past is a highlight. In general, the video is well done. That being said, improvements could be made in areas such as lighting and filming with greater depth of field.
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