Generic Game Show - ID# 433

Maine East
Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A behind the scenes documentary of "Generic Game Show," a long running game show that might finally bite off more than it can chew.

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  • 3/24 11:33 am - Work well - Interesting and strange concept that came across as a clever critique of TV trends. Nice job following the format of a mockumentary. Technically pretty solid as well. Good acting performances. The final line was really funny. Needs work - Possibly too dark of an ending.
  • 3/2 12:49 pm - Audio too hot around :40ish. The shooting couldn't have been better- it looked very "mockumentary"- style. Good acting. I didn't really get the ending. Didn't seem to fit.
  • 2/21 2:35 pm - Camera: consistently shot like a mockumentary. Well done! Lighting: lighting was pretty good overall, but you could have added some additional lighting without making it seem too overproduced. Sound: Sound was overall consistent; a few hot spots in the mix. Watch your VU meter. Editing: editing pace was appropriate and you cut between the interviews and the scenes very well. Story: I like the concept, and you actually executed a mockumentary very well. A few funny parts that stood out more than others. The ending was weird; not sure if it worked in terms of laughs.
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