Alderwomen Monet Wilson - ID# 440
Richards High School
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This is a feature story highlights 2nd Alderwoman, Monet S. Wilson, of Calumet City and her initiative to bring digital learning tool to the students of her community.
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- 4/27 7:52 am - Good segment topic. The b-roll you have is pretty good, but we need to see more. The segment starts to drag on when we just see a talking head. Also, use the rule of thirds when shooting your interview and have more space in front of where the person is looking. When Wilson starts to talk, you do not need to hear her say who she is what she does. A lower third should tell the viewer.
- 3/7 9:58 am - The reporter could have been placed on camera better, and the lighting for the interviewee was almost too much. You include some great B Roll to relate to what she is talking about!
- 3/5 9:36 am - I don't like the framing of the interview and the shots aren't steady. Beware of framing - the flagpoles int the standup look like they are coming out of the reporter's head.This is more of a nat sot pkg. She's very monotone -jump cuts.
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