AP Student Yard Signs - ID# 441

Richards High School
News Package

Entry Description

This package highlights the initiative our Advanced Placement Counseling is taking by distributing yard signs to our AP students.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 7:53 am - Some good b-roll and camera work, but I would like to see more b-roll and less of the interviewee. The person interviewing should be looking off to the side where there is more space. Good audio, except music really does not go in a harder type news story. The beginning really does not fit a news package, plus it went by so quick you cannot read the titles.
  • 3/6 11:58 pm - Would have liked to hear from the student reporter to give this story a bit more depth- great use of different shots and camera angles though!
  • 3/5 9:40 am - It was creative beginning, needed more than one voice. Felt like a promo more than a pkg.
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