How To Make An Origami Rose - ID# 460
Metea Valley
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Royalty free music provided by Soundstripe.com
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- 4/27 8:17 pm - Story: The style and story of this demo worked well together. The steps made sense and were easy to follow. It was concise and flowed in a way that made sense. Sound: At the beginning the sound was a bit off. I'm not sure why. As it went on it didn't bother me, but each time at the beginning it just felt a little off. You did well with bringing the music down when the VO was happening. Camera/Lighting/editing: Great use of lighting, and the incorportation of stop motion in it, the title, as well as the speed, all came together well.
- 4/26 6:39 am - Story: Process was clear and understandable Sound: Voice over is muffled. Music is well mixed Camera: Good composition. Could have used a more diverse range of shots, angles, and movements Lighting: Good
- 4/22 6:33 am - Music selection works well with the images you recorded. The voice-over explains the process very well. Good high angle camera shot. Keep producing more videos.
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