Distracted Driving PSA - ID# 478
Riverside Brookfield
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
30 second distracted driving PSA.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/22 2:03 pm - Good pacing for text on the screen. Creative way to show distracted driving rather than the expected showing in an actual car. May suggest a slight color change to add dramatic effect to the end. Good audio overall. Nice shot transitions and panning.
- 3/6 6:14 pm - A very simple way of showing us that someone can be gone because of texting and driving.
Judge 1
Positives: The message was clear and concise. The visual of an empty seat in the classroom was powerful. The call to action at the end was relevant to the message as well.
Improvements: The piece could have benefited from more of a variety of camera angles and shots. The dolly action was strong however, as we go along the line of students, we lose focus on the front row of students. Elaborating on the audio such as including a music track could have helped deliver a stronger message.
Judge 2
Positives: Good camera work and sound.
Improvements: Good idea but it needed more of an definitive ending.with a stronger, clear message.
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