Pool Demonstration - ID# 48
Glenbrook South
Demonstration
Entry Description
A visual demonstration on how to play 8 ball pool.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 8:25 pm - Story: Having a description of 8 ball was great, in case anyone watching doesn't know how it works. Then it flowed well into the steps. It was clear and concise. Sound: At the beginning it was at a good level, but then at :51 it changed a bit. So keep an ear out on that to keep it similar. The sound of the break was beautiful. Beautiful. My ears loved it. Camera/Lighting/editing: Your shots were framed beautifully, they lighting worked really well because it was in a dark room, but the table and pool balls were well lit, which is not always easy to acheive. So nice work with the camera and in editing. Great use of the camera in manual mode all around.
- 4/21 6:34 am - Great moving camera shots at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Great use of Close-Up camera shots throughout the video. Voice-overs are well done. Great demonstration video. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1
Positives: Good story and interesting HOW TO. Narrator speaks well.
Improvements: Too dark to see clearly. Not enough different shot types to understand concept.
Judge 2
Positives: Good opening moving shots. Good shot angles for your shots. The table is a great setting for strong shots as the balls come toward the camera, and you allow this to happen. Good job with the script and making it clear what is supposed to happen during the game.
Improvements: At times the lighting is a little dark and becomes distracting. There are times the audio gets lower, look at this and try to level them out. Overall not bad with the audio. I would have added some natural sound in this video because it would have helped the whole video.
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