Now Year Now Me - ID# 498
Metea Valley
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Entry Description
A unique take on resolutions for the New Year.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/22 2:04 pm - Beginning time lapse was a bit long. Nice variety of shots and great transition to quick cuts. Great, unique message overall. Hard to read the text on the whiteboard at the end.
- 3/6 6:20 pm - This was very inspirational.
Judge 1
Positives: The message was clear and uniquely conveyed. A wide variety of shots and camera effects were utilized to keep the viewer engaged.
Improvements: The music/vocals were louder than needed and were competing with the narration. The filter made the whiteboard difficult to read at the opening and closing of the piece.
Judge 2
Positives: Interesting story. Good VO reader. Editing built suspense.
Improvements: Story could be confusing. Old-look footage worked for feeling but hard to read and see. Moved to fast and students blocked the narrative on the board.
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