"Seasonal Sadness" - ID# 504
New Trier
News Package
Entry Description
News team from Trev TV produced this news package for the school's weekly news program.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 7:59 am - Interesting story. Zoom in more on the interviewees. Lots of dead space and extra headroom. We should not see the people being interviewed holding the microphone. We cannot hear the reporter asking the question.
- 3/7 10:33 am - Music really enhanced your story; framing of the interviews could be a little tighter, your shots seem a bit too wide. Think of the rule of thirds to really keep your interview subject in sharper focus.
- 3/7 10:32 am - The framing of the interviews needs to corrected - too much headroom. The standup in the beginning isn't necessary for the subject matter, there are better ways to tell the story. Jump cuts. I think the story could have been interesting but it was not approached in a compelling way.
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