If I Go Missing, It Was Dasani. - ID# 503
Wheeling High School
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
Have you heard the conspiracy theory about Dasani? Watch the video to find out if it's true.
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- 3/24 9:06 am - Works well - The premise is fun and unique. This was interesting to watch, and I could see something like this being a recurring series or segment, possibly a YouTube channel. The tone was a little confusing, but ultimately it worked for me. Pretty good job following a news report format as a parody but also as a comedic investigation. Needs work - It's a bit hard to navigate the tone of this, which some audiences would be confused by. I also really wanted this to take things further and end on a bigger victory or reveal. There was a story, but it never got very far dramatically.
- 3/24 8:52 am -
- 3/2 2:25 pm - Good effort, but this is more news report than comedic narrative. Great, tenacious reporting, btw!
- 2/21 3:12 pm - This seemed like it was just a funny news report or a mock news report. Not a comedic short film.
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