Football - ID# 53
Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description
A promotional video for the Glenbrook South varsity football team.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 3:19 pm - This was so visually entertaining as well as a demonstration of thoughtful and effective editing, nice work! Beautiful editing and effects/transitions. Some of the footage was a bit dark but it was a lot of fun. I do wonder if you represented the whole team enough as there was a focus on a small group, though the uniforms and helmets definitely mask individuals. Overall, nice work!
- 4/20 2:40 pm - Pros - Great video! You had a variety of shots to fit your template and it really emphasized excitement for me as the viewer. Great editing by including some key transitions like the players jumping for a high five, this was awesome! The lighting was spot on and the inclusive of different dark shots with the brighter shots was a great touch. Cons - I would end it with some form of graphic to include the next game or just a simple Titans logo of some sort to offer more of a conclusion to the video.
Judge 1
Positives: liked the still shots juxtaposed wide range of players and action illustrated
Improvements: voices of players could have added another layer more shots of actual game action could have added more excitement
Judge 2
Positives: The use of graphics is strong and helps to tell the story of the football team. I like the lightning bolt that was used in the video and how you kept the vintage/camera roll look. This helps to keep a good theme throughout the whole video. Good choice of song with the theme.
Improvements: I assume this was for the second week, but I am not sure why the 1-0 is at the start. There are a couple of dark shots, but that is hard to balance with the field. Look at a way to increase the lighting on the shots.
Judge 3
Positives: Loved this! The editing and use of photos in this project really stood out to me. The way the team was portrayed as both skilled football players and stylish models was really impressive. The editing and overall style of the project made it seem like this team was the coolest around! Keep up the excellent work in your future projects, and continue to explore your creative potential.
Improvements: Try to be more creative with the sound design. It was just one song the entire time. Try and expand by using some natural sounds as well. Additionally, I'd love to see the players in a few more locations. Perhaps at a local diner, or somewhere else "cool" to fit this vibe.
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