Wonderland of Students - ID# 58
Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description
This video features GBS students with various unique stories, activites, and interests in school and outside of school. It highlights the school community and the inclusive culture.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 3:02 pm - You have a great variety of beautiful shots and footage of the various kids, really nice work capturing so much content. However, the storyline and message of the video was a little hard to understand at first. I would have added a title at the end to really hit home the message and also ensure that you have a vision in the beginning and then run it by outside sources (anyone not involved in the video) to make sure the end product matches what you originally intended to produce. Keep up the great work!
- 4/18 9:22 am - Pros - This is a great video. You did a fantastic job capturing each student's individual skills and passions. Your shots are smooth and vary in camera shots which were very well done. Your audio was crisp and clear. Cons - I am not sure if this belongs in the promotion category. With including interviews and changes in location, this seemed to be more of a news segment. This might have been a time constraint thing, but the video ended abruptly.
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