When You Have To Go - ID# 91
Glenbrook North
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
This is a short comedic scene we did as a project for our class. Our goal was to tell a complete story in one minute or less.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/24 10:11 am - Works well - There was a good variety of shots here. The editing was well paced and exciting to match the situation. Relatable to audiences. Needs work - The story feels incomplete. There's no real obstacles, or at least not enough to make this a funny struggle. This might have been better if it was 30 seconds longer, in order to show more things happening.
- 3/2 1:58 pm - You're off to a decent start, but not much of a story here.
- 2/21 2:47 pm - This was too short to even be worth submitting. It was okay, but it’s basically a funny TikTok. There’s no writing, dialogue, or even a real story. It’s literally just following a person who needs to desperately go to the bathroom, and even the twist at the end where he’s trying to open the door is only worth a small chuckle at most.
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